銆€銆€1.灏介噺涓嶈鐢ㄩ€氭€т唬璇峢e锛岄櫎浜嗘槑纭湴鎸囦唬涓€涓敺鎬т汉鐗╂椂锛岄兘瑕佽娉曢伩鍏嶄娇鐢ㄨ繖涓瘝銆傚彲浠ユ牴鎹澧冮渶瑕侊紝閫夌敤涓嬪垪鏇挎崲鏂瑰紡锛?/p>

銆€銆€1)閲囩敤澶嶆暟褰㈠紡銆?/p>

銆€銆€Sexist: When bathing a baby, never leave him unattended.

銆€銆€Revised: When bathing babies, never leave them unattended.

銆€銆€缁欏┐鍎挎礂婢℃椂锛屼竴瀹氳鏃跺埢鍦ㄤ粬浠梺杈圭収绠°€?/p>

銆€銆€2)鐢╳e/us/our鏀瑰啓鍘熷彞銆?/p>

銆€銆€Sexist: From each according to his abilities, to each according to his needs.

銆€銆€Revised: From each of us according to our abilities, to each of us according to our needs.

銆€銆€鍚勫敖鎵€鑳斤紝鎸夐渶鍒嗛厤銆?/p>

銆€銆€3)鏀圭敤绗簩浜虹О銆?/p>

銆€銆€Sexist: No man knows his true character until he has run out of gas, purchased something on an installment plan and raised an adolescent.

銆€銆€Revised: You don't know what your true character is until you have run out of gas, purchased something on the installment plan and raised an adolescent.

銆€銆€鍙湁褰撴苯杞︽病娌广€佸垎鏈熶粯娆捐喘鐗╁拰鎶氬吇闈掓槬鏈熺殑瀛╁瓙鏃讹紝浜虹殑鏈潵鍝佹€ф墠浼氭樉闇插嚭鏉ャ€?/p>

銆€銆€4)鏀圭敤琚姩璇€併€?/p>

銆€銆€Sexist: One who, when he has the choice of two evils, chooses both.

銆€銆€Revised: One who, when given the choice of two evils, chooses both.

銆€銆€褰撻潰瀵逛袱绉嶇姜鎭惰鍋氬嚭閫夋嫨鐨勬椂鍊欏氨涓や釜閮介€夈€?/p>

銆€銆€5)瀹屽叏鐪佺暐浠ｈ瘝銆?/p>

銆€銆€Sexist: What does a person thinks of after he becomes a deportee?

銆€銆€Revised: What does a person thinks of after becoming a deportee?

銆€銆€涓€涓汉琚┍閫愪箣鍚庝細浣滀綍鎰熸兂鍛?

銆€銆€6)鐢ㄥ啝璇嶆浛浠ｃ€?/p>

銆€銆€Sexist: Can a critic give his opinion of...?

銆€銆€Revised: Can a critic give an opinion of...?

銆€銆€璇勮瀹惰兘璇勮...鍚?

銆€銆€7)鐢╯omeone锛宱ne锛宼he one锛宯o one绛夋浛浠ｃ€?/p>

銆€銆€Sexist: He who can take advice is sometimes superior to he who can give it.

銆€銆€Revised: Someone who can take advice is sometimes superior to the one who can give it.

銆€銆€鎺ュ彈蹇犲憡鑰呮湁鏃惰儨杩囧彂鍑哄繝鍛婅€呫€?/p>

銆€銆€8)浣跨敤he and she鎴杊is and her锛屼絾浣跨敤鐨勬鏁颁笉瀹滃お澶氥€俿he/he浠呭彲鐢ㄤ簬澶囧繕褰?memos)銆佷究鏉?notes)锛屾垨鑰呴潪姝ｅ紡鐨勪氦璋堜箣涓€?/p>

銆€銆€9)鐢ㄥ悕璇嶆垨涓婁笅鏂囦腑鐢ㄨ繃鐨勫悓涔夎瘝鏇挎崲銆?/p>

銆€銆€Sexist: To find a friend one must close one eye - to keep him, two.

銆€銆€Revised: To find a friend, one must close one eye - to keep one, two.

銆€銆€鎯虫壘鏈嬪弸锛屽氨寰楃潄涓€鍙溂锛岄棴涓€鍙溂;鎯崇暀浣忔湅鍙嬶紝灏卞緱鍙岀溂閮介棴涓娿€?/p>

銆€銆€2.灏介噺浣跨敤閭ｄ簺鍖呮嫭涓ゆ€у湪鍐呯殑璇嶏紝鍗虫棤鎬у埆涔嬪垎鐨勮瘝(gender-free words)銆?/p>

銆€銆€渚嬪锛歝hild锛宼eacher锛宱fficer(璀﹀畼)锛宲eople锛寃orker锛宨mmigrant(绉绘皯)锛寁oter(鎶曠エ鑰咃紝閫夋皯)锛宑oach(鏁欑粌)锛宑hurch member(鏁欏弸)锛宻ales rep(鎺ㄩ攢鍛?锛実rand parent(澶?绁栫埗鎴栫姣?锛宭eader锛宔vening student锛宔mployee (闆囧憳)锛宼est taker (鑰冪敓锛屽簲璇曡€?锛宔ngineer锛宑ustomers(椤惧)锛宒ealer(浜ゆ槗鑰咃紝鍟嗕汉)锛宑lerk(鑱屽憳锛屽姙浜嬪憳)锛宑ivilian(骞虫皯)锛宻cientist锛宱perator(鎺ョ嚎鍛橈紝鍔炰簨鍛?锛宲atriot(鐖卞浗鑰?锛宲erson锛宲lanner(绛栧垝鑰咃紝璁″垝鑰?锛宲olitician(鏀垮)锛宲roducer(鐢熶骇鑰呫€佸埗閫犺€?锛宼utor(瀹跺涵鏁欏笀锛屽甯?锛宺eporter锛寃riter锛宑hief executive(棣栧腑琛屾斂闀垮畼)锛宔verybody锛宔xpert绛夈€?/p>

銆€銆€3.鍐欎俊鏃讹紝濡傛灉涓嶇煡閬撴敹淇′汉鐨勬€у埆锛屾渶濂戒笉瑕佷娇鐢ㄤ紶缁熺殑Dear Sir鍜孌ear Madam銆傚彲浠ラ€夌敤涓嬪垪涔嬩竴锛?/p>

銆€銆€1) Dear Friends of the Library(浜茬埍鐨勫浘涔﹂鐨勬湅鍙嬩滑)

銆€銆€2)Dear Sir/Madam, (浜茬埍鐨勫コ澹滑鍙婂厛鐢熶滑)

銆€銆€3) Dear Personnel Officer(浜茬埍鐨勪汉浜嬪闀?

銆€銆€4)Dear Committee Member(浜茬埍鐨勫鍛?

銆€銆€5)Dear Citizen(浜茬埍鐨勫叕姘?

銆€銆€6)Dear Customer(浜茬埍鐨勯【瀹?

銆€銆€7) Dear Councilor(浜茬埍鐨勫弬璁憳/椤鹃棶)

銆€銆€8)Dear Agent(浜茬埍鐨勪唬鐞?

銆€銆€9)Dear Director(浜茬埍鐨勫巶闀?灞€闀?涓讳换)

銆€銆€10) To Whom it May Concern(鑷存湁鍏充汉澹?